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9/24/10
Friday, September 24th
*(Working) Topic Outlines
---HW: Must check yours with me for 5 pt assignment
------today or Monday at the latest
*OBJECTIVE: Compose text with a strong controlling idea and effective paragraphing.
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Robert H., 1st hour
I walked into class today pretty excited just because it was friday and then to make matters even better i forgot that all classes were shorter because of the pep assembly. Then in class we just worked on our topic sentences and throughout the whole period students would go up his desk and see if they were doing a good job and if not they would go back and fix it. Personally i was prettyy much done with all my topic sentences so then I started to work on my rough draft which i got my first two paragraphs in. Then towards the end of the bell everyone was packing up and asking who was going to the game tonight and homecoming tommorrow. Overall I would say today was a pretty easy beneficial day!
As I walked into class today, I was pretty pumped that it was Friday and that it was Blue and Silver day and the best part that this weekend was homecoming. Conversations all around me talked about the football game, homecoming plans, what the girls dresses looked like and i sat there getting more and more excited. As the bell rang signaling class to begin, Mr. B, stated that we needed to finish our outline for our essay over 1984, this was for 10 points. As our minds got to thinking and our pencils began to write one by one each of us went to Mr.B's desk to get our outlines checked by him. He was very helpful in helping you plan your outline successfully and getting it to the point where you were ready for our essay. Many people were upset that the "bell of excellence" wasn't going to be used this time, as many of faces in class frowned we went straight to work, well some of us actually, Nick on the other hand whose outline was finished on thursday, no big deal, was interested in finding out more about Mr. B's life, two things are for sure is that Mr.B doesnt know the Backstreet Boys from Nsync and he DEFINATLY doesn't have the Bieber Fever.
2 comments:
Robert H., 1st hour
I walked into class today pretty excited just because it was friday and then to make matters even better i forgot that all classes were shorter because of the pep assembly. Then in class we just worked on our topic sentences and throughout the whole period students would go up his desk and see if they were doing a good job and if not they would go back and fix it. Personally i was prettyy much done with all my topic sentences so then I started to work on my rough draft which i got my first two paragraphs in. Then towards the end of the bell everyone was packing up and asking who was going to the game tonight and homecoming tommorrow. Overall I would say today was a pretty easy beneficial day!
Tarah H., 3rd hour
As I walked into class today, I was pretty pumped that it was Friday and that it was Blue and Silver day and the best part that this weekend was homecoming. Conversations all around me talked about the football game, homecoming plans, what the girls dresses looked like and i sat there getting more and more excited. As the bell rang signaling class to begin, Mr. B, stated that we needed to finish our outline for our essay over 1984, this was for 10 points. As our minds got to thinking and our pencils began to write one by one each of us went to Mr.B's desk to get our outlines checked by him. He was very helpful in helping you plan your outline successfully and getting it to the point where you were ready for our essay. Many people were upset that the "bell of excellence" wasn't going to be used this time, as many of faces in class frowned we went straight to work, well some of us actually, Nick on the other hand whose outline was finished on thursday, no big deal, was interested in finding out more about Mr. B's life, two things are for sure is that Mr.B doesnt know the Backstreet Boys from Nsync and he DEFINATLY doesn't have the Bieber Fever.
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